It was a lovely day,the drops of rain were continously touching the window pane.the aroma of fresh breeze was filling heart and soul of tehzeeb with new dreams and hopes.her spirits were high,she was dancing without music,the sweetness of weather provided the soothing melody.suddenly her cell phone rang up,she picked it up.the voice was jovial,it was her best friend heena.
Heena : hullo
Tehzeeb : hey bitch =P
Heena : you can never change *laugh* how're you doing? ;)
Tehzeeb : no never! *laugh* m doing great,how about you?
Heena : truly rocking like always ;)
Tehzeeb : ooh rockstar eh? =P hey btw did you watch rock on?the new show on mtv
Heena : nopes!powercut mahn!i feel like shooting the power suppliers,they should be called at one place and then shooted at once *laugh*
Tehzeeb :*laugh* oh please have some mercy on them,it would seem like jalliahwala bagh part-2 =P
Heena : alright!mercy granted,go and announce that heena khan has granted another life to power suppliers and they can party now xD *laugh*
Tehzeeb : yea sure sure!you'll go to heaven haan,their families will surely pray for you =P *laugh*
Heena : lol yeap.
Tehzeeb : hmph,what happened?
Heena : nothing,nothing at all,why?
Tehzeeb : whom are you fooling dude?speak up?tell na what happened?
Heena : arre what made you think that something has happened?seriously nothing is there..
Tehzeeb : cool!means you'll be telling afterwards,isn't it?
Heena : *finally broke into tears* how did you get to know?i tried my best to veil it up with laughs?do you know any trick?i mean you never go wrong in predicting my mood?even on text you catch it with ease?how?
Tehzeeb : hmph..dunno dude,i just get it.what happened anyway,don't change the topic now.else i'll paint your hidden wings with purple lolx
Heena : series of incidences,i'll text you after sometime.i am getting late for friends birthday party for now.talk to you in night buddy.
Tehzeeb-okay,but do enjoy the party,and don't drink vodka in excess and dance like lunatic jerk like the way you did in amrita's party last year *laugh* and yea,cheer up,do puke out whatever is bothering you,we'll burn it up by moulding it in comic scene xD
Heena-yup,for sure *laugh* .i am relaxed now.thanks a tonne for great understanding you shower upon me.love you :)
Tehzeeb - aw thats what friends are for buddy , love you too .. now go for party na,have fun,love you too xD
Heena-bye .. see ya :)
11 comments:
really cute... first fiction..but surely the best one :)
Thanks :)
found u in sulagna s blog ...really had a good time reading the poems and this story..
anyway it wud be a pleasure if u visit mine....comments and followers r always welcome :)
Glad you liked it :)
i'll visit yours :)
LOL you know what??? it kept reminding me of my wicked days in college..absolute revisiting of memories happened!!
you write really well girl..and thank you for the comment on my blog..you know it makes you so happy...
look i am still smiling :)
It was my pleasure. :)
thanx for dropping and commenting :)
nice fiction
thanx for visiting my blog..
byeeee keep blogging
^ - thanx :)
hmmmm...so even u bore ppl wid this senti stuff :P....some fabulous works here...u should think abt going professional....my perfectly imperfect mind could only swallow this 1 though
Professional?professionals will certainly drop a bomb at my place for ruining the word professional lmao :P thanks for stopping by :)
Remins ov our cnvrsatns..... U always do dis.... Dun catcb d feelins .... :)) bt love u with awl my heart....
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