O noble creature,
Go to the sleep,
Visit the place where you always wanted to be,
Far away from this agony,
Beyond the world of despair,
Where you could be you,
On your very own land,
Where you never have to say hello to goodbye,
Where there is nothing to learn,
No chapter to teach you anything,
Where you could be free,
Where you can actually breathe,
Where right and wrong never existed,
Where tears are befriended with concern,
Where fight and hurts don't live,
Where only love is all around,
Where pure hearts surrounds,
Where your silence could be understood,
Where light never faded,
Where souls were never traded,
Where happiness doesn't live apart,
Where you can live before you die.
14 comments:
'where pure hearts surround"
babe this is an utopian fantasy and the closest we can get is our homes with family..
well written ya !!
umm
Where your silence could be understood,
Where light never faded
beautifully crafted lines.
glad to see that m in ur followers list...
sulagna di-um agree,thanks :)
ravindra-same here,thanks :)
ayu-i told ya,i liked your blog very much.i am following it too,pleasure is all mine.i'll get to read good stuff :)i read your poems as well,couldn't comment coz i was running short of tym,u're a nyc poet ^_^
lovely! following you now :-)
Hi Sunakshi, the last line was the best punch of all..wellll expressed dear..:) CUte..
celestalrays-glad to noe tht,thanks :)
pramoda di-thanks ^_^
Where you can live before you die
Deadly line....sunakshiii u r tooo good...
dido-thanks :)
"Oh my sleep apnea,
The silence between..
Take me to the world where
dawn waited for me to wake up!"
A wonderful caper with words to say something that resides in everybody's heart.Deep enough to remember. :)
http://sayit1cmore.blogspot.com/
^ - thanks for stopping by :)
ayu-thank you so much :)
hey sunakshi...dis is really nice...thanks for dis 1...i m in search of dat place???? hope vl find it soon...waise i am happy and wid pure hearts when i m alone..thanks again
anki-thanks for stopping by :)
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