His life was an elegy before you came,
You entered and he got wings to fly,
With all the love and care you gave him,
Each day he got better reason to stay alive.
No thousand words he could use to thank you,
Just his soul he could afford to lose for you,
His heart belongs to you,
All he could say forever he will be with you.
He is left with no strength to stay away from you,
You are the one whom he owe so much,
You are the one he need for rest of his life,
You are his angel sent from above.
16 comments:
damn good choice of words
the 3rd person perspective is quite good...i have to try it out sometime
:) lovely
lovely poem dear...:)
how lucky he could be to find one like her he could make much difference in his life...:)
real or fiction?
P.S. i also love the pic that came with your poem...sooooo...romantic, it is!!!
Freelancer-thanks :)
ayu-woha!thats cool,Goodluck dude xD xP
sulagna di-thanks :)
amity me-its a complete fiction,just tried to give the pic some words.thanxx :)
oh so beautiful :-)
raaji-thanks :)
nice blog man................keep it going.......
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anish-thanks dude..!
This is beautiful, dear!
I love reading other people's poetry, it gives me such inspiration sometimes:)
xx
this is beautiful. I hope I have this one day with a guy.
sher-same here xD thanks for stopping by :)
melanie-hope so xD thanks for stopping by :)
yaar awesome....just speechless..want 2 be at boy's place...really gud...6 n 8 lines r fulll of luv one can express....
anki-thanks :)
lovely they are:)
sorcerer-yeah,thanks :)
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