My hands are open to embrace the cold winds passing by,
I guess this tough time will soon fly away,
I have no idea how and when,
Not just smiles but laughters will accompany me then.
May be i am not sure who i am now,
May be i don't know who i'll be ,
But trust on this note of mine,
When i say my thirst to live never dies.
Yeah i started breaking,
No doubt i started stumbling,
I suffocate in the shadows at times,
I wander in silent screams many times.
Pure exhilaration is not what am i expecting to arrive,
I know nothing can ever stop strive,
Yet there is a hope for a real smile,
I guess something better would be awaiting on other side.
12 comments:
@Sunakshi: Sure! Thanks! And hey, I do follow your blog! :D
(As in reply to my post)
And hey, nice one too!!
but, why isn't there a title to your post???
May be i am not sure who i am now,
May be i don't know who i'll be.
WOw.. sunakshii...
guess something better would be awaiting on other side.
i'm hoping too :)
Beautiful pic. Smily is do cute. :)
Beautiful words woven beautifully. :) I enjoyed reading it. :)
WoOoOoOoW!! awesome di :))
Happy valentine's day ;)
love it!
really nice..
especially the last line..
I guess something better would be awaiting on other side.
Awesome......
beautiful!!! The poem is a true depiction of the current phase of my life.
Hi Sunakshi;
You must have read my mind... :)
Me, too, like you, is struggling who really I am while I am already in my middle life, but still have hopes that I will find my real self on the other side...:)
Very touching post dear...:)
Re: your wish that I give you some tips on writing acros, you can have lessons here: just click on the link and once you have tried your hand on it, link your acros here, too! Goodluck and hope to see you at Acrostic Only!
http://acrosticonly.blogspot.com/
Love,
Big Sis Amity
Hi Sunakshi,
Despite of the sad emotions mixed in this poem still there's hope attached in each word... very well done!!!:)
Good day!!!:)
Smile!!!:)
>kelvin
Beautiful lines. I sit here and read these lines with a feeling of awe. The voice within has taken a physical form in these words. Hope has been highlighted and hope is all that there is in these lines. I am touched.
Dido-thanks :)
ayu-bingo! hmph.. thanks for stopping by :)
chandrika-nice to know that,thanks for visiting :)
shri-aw thanks and same to you :)
angel-thanks :)
creativity-thanks for stopping by :)
nipun-you're the only one who can relate to it.hope things get fine on your way soon :)
kelvin-thanks :)
amity sis-i hope the same,thanks a lot :)
vittaldas-I guess thats what real poetry is.the one which can be felt from bottom.i am obliged to know that :)
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