I dial my favorite number in the world so wide,
When you answer i feel like some part of me has already died,
Did we make memories only so we could remember ourselves by,
Did i know that i'd raise my hand someday to say goodbye?
Miserable months up in front,so lonely i stand here,
But you seem too tired to even care,
With tears and tricks you manage to explain,
But did you ever realize it gives pain.
May be i just want to live for today,
Yet somewhere i miss you everyday,
For the girl-talks,movies,question papers,laughs and tears,
For being the best friends and sharing the greatest treasures.
14 comments:
I just want to let you know that I'm loving your poetry! =]
Missing a loved one, a best friend. I know how it feels. :-|
Take care.
What a beautiful poem? I loved the picture, but the words were just magic. Thanks for sharing.
Yvonne.
Hey Sunakshi,
well versed...freshness in abundance...liked it...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
Thta's beautiful. It can be harder losing a great friend than it is to lose a boy friend/girl friend. When we lose a BF/GF we still have the great friend to help us. But when the great friend leaves...
UR the best...do i have to say that again??
simply the best sunkz :)
I read it again... loved it loved it loved it
awesomely expressed!! luvd it!!
and I am all too familiar with that :-)
I can so relate to this!
P.s. I am back and just want to thank you for your kind words on my last entry.
Love,
Jalpari
hey first time vistin ur blog, liked it, dat ipod widget, nice music, and about this post its just so true, i know its all the same my gal feels, i just do everything to her as u said ur favorite no one do...
Namit,
My SPacE- Wen i was a boy
Aaah. The best friend thing..goodbyes. 'Don't care' attitude. It kills.
itz so touching...how du u get dez thoughts...
nice poem.. :D
i always liked those rhymin thing..i dont know how u ppl form the right words.. hmmmmm....
nice poem though it makes us sad... hmmm....
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