Its nothing more than a strife,
But i am surviving,
Just like the gentle bird in morning.
I am the diamond glints on the snow,
I am the wind that blow,
Even if you stand near my grave and weep someday,
Please don't.Because i will nearby you each day.
Numb heart at times fades the crispness,
Embracing the spineless thoughts of nothingness,
Mind sometimes ponder over weird lines,
Casting a bad spell over the life that shines.
Yet i believe life is worth living,
We begin walking only after falling,
Everyday can be different,
If you are willing to accept that nothing is permanent.
23 comments:
Excellent poem, slowly changes do occur in life that we hardly reconise it at the time.
Take care.
Yvonne.
Happiness and hope: perfect. =]
Thanks for sharing your poem!
Beautiful !!! :)
Loved every bit of it!
Superb sunkz :) as alwaysss
Nice lines, and a good lesson learned... life is too short to stop and wail over what is past.
I gotta learn.
beautiful
loved it di :))
beautiful.. :)
great work, I really like the message.
In the back of my mind, I occasionally have the thought that we need to forgive people who make a mistake (but not if it's the same mistake over and over) because everyone who stands-up is bound to fall at some point. But I can't write it in a way that would make anyone want to read it.
awesome...really!
inspirin 1......... :D
i loved it...... its motivatin..... :)
I loved it =)
shouldn't lose hope, have faith instead. Stuff happens but life goes on.
Esp love this line "I am the diamond glints on the snow"
<3
"Everyday can be different,
If you are willing to accept that nothing is permanent."
Beautifully written. It almost hurts to read it though. But I do believe in the last two lines because thats what keeps me sane during my sad and low days.
I hope all is good at your end. Thanks for dropping by on my blog. :)
..worthy of praise my friend... very uplifting... and O, it has a title... "welcome to my life"... great... and i'm very pleased to meet you... a blessed Sunday!!!:D
..(^^)b...
>Kelvin
Thank you for your comment :)
Glad you liked the poem!
Ah what a lovely poem !! And with maturity you have transformed the negative start ending it up with positive spirits !! Quite apreciative ! Admire it lot !
visiting your blog after a long time...and i had a lot of reading to you..But its a very good experience..Thanks...
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और हम कुछ नहीं करते हैं, ग़ज़ब करते हैं.....
मेरे ब्लॉग पर भी स्वागत है ...... पधारें !
जय हो मंगलमय हो
awesome awesome awesome!!
too gud :D
Beautiful poem..:)
Very nicely written..:)
LIked it..:D
May you have more love, peace and light in this time of the year my friend.
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!^^
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GOD Bless!^^
~Kelvin
truly beautiful...perfect blend of happiness n hope....loved it...simply great.:)
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