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Friday, July 30, 2010

Wishful Thinking


Dark are the ways of life,
Till the end we just strife,
Engulfed by the venomous surprises,
We barely look at the sorrows and cries.
Comfort we all are searching,
Our hearts are filled with wishful thinking,
Endless hope or hopeless end,
To every memory we forever get attached.
Past mocks down the smile of today,
Today offers worries for upcoming day,
Our mind collide with thousand thoughts every single day,
But the answers seem to be million steps away.
Secretly we feed upon the fantasies,
Detaching ourselves from the never ending puzzles,
Escaping from the realms of reality,
We struggle for self discovery.
No matter how deep we dive in,
Some traits are forever hiding,
Like the scent of pressed flower within the diary pages,
We keep adapting the changes.

18 comments:

ritika said...

I too am trapped in a memory game, and memories keep haunting us day and night of our loved ones!

I think our lives resemble to one another!

Beyond Horizon said...

hmm...yes it feels gud sumtimes 2 blive in fantasy....dat untouched reality :)

P.S. nice makeover of ur blog :)

Deepak said...

well very expressed poem :)

Komal Ali said...

Beautiful. :)
That how one should roll.

Komal Ali said...

And thanks a bunch for dropping by at my blog. :) You've a lifetime stalk-follow-er for your blog. :P

welcome to my world of poetry said...

I love to go down memory lane to remember my loved ones, It don't make me sad but I have so many happy memories that it lightenes my heart.

Enjoyed your post, excellently written.
Yvonne.

Sam Liu said...

This poem has a beautiful and enchanting lyricism to it, and within your wonderful words, you suffuse a profound philosophy. This line: "Escaping from the realms of reality,
We struggle for self discovery" really stirred something within me, a deeply poignant and oh so true piece of poetry.

DiDo said...

Like always sunkz... beautiful :)

Madhu said...

so well written..) nice girl!

Mademoiselle Deva said...

we all have our world into which we escape! it would be beautiful if everyone could build this imaginative world in the reality!

♣ Tharangni ♣ said...

omg! really awesome!

sulagna ™ said...

thank you pretty poetess for the wonderful comment on my blog..you guys always cheer me up :) and and poetess Shriti :) happy friendship day beautiful

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aww..excellent!! this is really good and reflects every one's life ^^ i can relate myself into this :D


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HaRy!! said...

no wonder change is the only thing that is permanent :

Tripat "Prerna" said...

awww....m touched deep inside...
wonderful :)

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impuregod said...

first of all.... loved the blog title. and about this poem.. it just leaves the reader in despair.... beautiful composition and phrases.... and loved the way image goes with the poem.... keep bloggin...

shruti said...

mast likhti hai yaar...awesome one

TheBluntBlogger said...

very very well written...i get worried about tomorrow and get forget how i am wasting the moments i have now...

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