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Tuesday, August 17, 2010

 
Drenched in the twilight,
Plucking the petals one by one,
Couldn't notice the arrival of dark velvet night,
Looking at the autopsy which cannot be undone.



11 comments:

Madhu said...

so cute girl..:):)

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Very good.

Yvonne.

The Silhouette said...

Hey Sunakshi...

i liked the way you ended it...your four liners are amazing...you actually give a thought to what you write...

regards,
The Silhouette...

RicAdeMus said...

Twilight is my favorite time of the day.

Sam Liu said...

"Drenched in the twilight" - vivid, lyrical and deeply poignant. A very beautiful piece of writing.

ambiguous_angel said...

love the photo.

and very lyrical writing.
;0

Fickle Cattle said...

cute shot. and i like the poem. it has a nice rhythm.

http://ficklecattle.blogspot.com/

Anonymous Someone said...

Petals plucking one by one?
Loves me, loves me not?

just wondering.

Cheers
Blasphemous Aesthete

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

youre really one of a kind :3

♠ Tharangni ♠ said...

its reallllyyy niceee! ♥ it! ♦

>>In reply to mu post<<
@Sunakshi~ Actually is a letter to a best friend, not from! :D

No problems girl, even i'm busy with projects and assignments and stuff... but i guess i'll have to go through that for the next level in life! X)

Komal Ali said...

:) sigh.

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