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Saturday, December 26, 2009

Wandering soul


The voice in her head screams aloud,
Yet her lips don't utter a word,
The mistakes she had done,
The pits in which she had fallen,
It terribly reminds her of every bad that had happened.
Fighting the battle within,
Nothing to say,
Nowhere to escape,
Nothing to ponder,
On the meaningless streets her brain wander.
She sit in the crowded place,
And the world pass her by,
Tracing the criss crossed lines on her palm,
Gazing the destiny which made her path,
Reflecting the decisions which changed her life.









13 comments:

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Hey,
Loved the lines:
Tracing the criss crossed lines on her palm,
Gazing the destiny which made her path,
Reflecting the decisions which changed her life.

Nicely done! I guess the modern style of living makes us wonder about all these.

I thought Nothing to ponder does not fit in the poem. When there is a battle within and when there are screaming voices in her head, her head can't be blank. So, definitely she has something to ponder. Just a quick thought, only if you feel like doing something. :-)

Cheers,
Vittal

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

love these lines:

Tracing the criss crossed lines on her palm,
Gazing the destiny which made her path,
Reflecting the decisions which changed her life.



i also like the meaning of the poem XP so great!

Chocolate Lover said...

beautiful
loved it :))

DiDo said...

Amazing sunakshiii

DiDo said...

heyy and nice blog template :)

Sunakshi said...

Dido-thanks :)

shri- :)

ayu-thanks.. :)

vittaldas-well,the battles don't let her ponder anything.too numb to ponder.thanks for paying so much attention to every line. :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

I'm glad I make you happy ^__^

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

0.0 i never thought our fave lines(me and Vittal)are the same!! haha..coincidence,, :3

Sunakshi said...

ayu- ^_^

sulagna said...

my god...you keep surprising me with every poem i read!!
beautiful babe..beautiful

Sunakshi said...

sulagna di-thanks :)

Pria said...

nicely written.. nice lines.. :)

Sunakshi said...

pria-thanks :)

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