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Saturday, December 5, 2009

Rise like a phoenix


Time blunts the edge of grief,
Listen to me,listen to me please,
Leave your soul free,
Watch her dance,watch her dance please.
He is done with shuffling your destiny cards,
Yes the one above with highest powers,
Guess what he has got for you in his store,
Its an ace which everyone waits for.
Rise like a phoenix from the ashes of worst time,
Its all your time to shine,
No use of harping on the same string,
Don't hung up at your last leg.
Time blunts the edge of grief,
Listen to me,listen to me please,
Leave your soul free,
Watch her dance,watch her dance please.







13 comments:

DiDo said...

good one sunakshi...
Rise like a phoenix from the ashes of worst time,

celestialrays said...

nice! i needed it :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

im sorry about that sunakshi..i just made it awhile ago ..i was so inspired by your poems i started to make mine..sorry about it..but anyway..thanks you like it..i always adore you..believe me..you're great...

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

and im just a novice..>_

Sunakshi said...

Dido-thanks :)

celestialrays-ooh thz nyc ;)

ayu-what you are apologizing for? :O you seriously write awesome :) keep writing :)thanks for stopping by :)

Being Pramoda... said...

Very expressive..:)..good one re..

Sunakshi said...

pramoda di-thanks :)

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

Very well done... you are so good with poetry :-)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

well..i just apologized coz i think that maybe you'll think that i lied about not reading poems as great as yours.well..i didn't lied..really..

chocolate lover said...

hi sunakshi di..
hw r u?
loved the poem..
:))

Sunakshi said...

raaji-thanks :)

ayu-nothing like that *chill* :)

shri-m really good wabau sista? :) thanks :)

Niraj said...

very sweet poem..keep on good work..

Sunakshi said...

niraj-thanks :)

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