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Sunday, January 3, 2010

Life goes on..

It was nearly midnight.The chilly winds of  december month was making her to shiver.she was standing near window,gazing the misty dark sky,pondering over the 25 years she has lived.her canvas of life had all the colors,right from the extreme bright to the dull,which made her remember the journey till now when someone asked her in morning overall how your life have been till now.she cheerfully answered 'truly awesome'
In her childhood,she was adored for no reason,mommy's sweetheart and daddy's angel she was.she got all the things she wanted,she experienced the most beautiful time.she was taught that wealth is not everything,its the honesty,love,trust and care what counts the most.
Then her teenage arrived.life turned out unkind,every time she thought something good is coming on her way,Mr. bad luck came in her way,destroying the faith.The people she loved the most left her,she tasted ignorance,hatred,betrayal,uncountable humiliations.her believes and dreams got shattered.she decided not to believe on the one with highest powers,in angels who makes everything fall in line.she gave up on everything,she gave up on herself.she was living just for the sake of existing.then one day,she read an article in newspaper *Be thankful for what you have*
It started with eye catching line-
Do you think you are the only one who is suffering in the whole world?you are the only one who have experienced the worst of everything?the betrayals,hatred,ignorance,humiliations?..
She couldn't resist reading the whole article,she continued..
there are some situations which break us in such a manner that we give up on everything,we crawl back in our shell and lock ourself in fake sense of security,but there are countless people around us who too have gone through the worst,or who are going through the same.no word of wisdom matters in such condition,even we're mature enough to understand the thing,and we knows time blunts the edges of grief,yet we sit back and cry because we have got nothing to fight for.but life is an ongoing process,none has got strong hold over it.there are large number of people who are deprived of basic requirements including what a person needs the most i.e food,shelter,clothing along with love,care,concern.at least you'll be having some of these.be happy and thankful to the lord above that you're blessed with wonderful gifts of life and make yourself capable of helping those who need you.be true to yourself,that's all what matters.people will enter in your life,but only few will remain till end.there is even possibility that all leave,but have faith that somewhere there is a road mapped out especially for you.
That day onwards,she moved on.she recollected the pieces of trust within,and fixed the hope in place.
years passed...
She faced all the challenges with courage,and embraced every little happiness.
At the age of 25,she was the loveliest and successful lady,with most beautiful heart in the world.

P.S-just trying hand in writing fiction.your comments and criticisms would be taken care of.. ^_^

24 comments:

Chocolate Lover said...

wooow..
awesome di
loved it!
I think you should continue with this :))

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

I think this was excellent, Please keep going I thoroughly enjoyed this post. Good luck.

Yvonne.

ambiguous_angel said...

its beautiful.
I enjoyed reading it and i was inspired:)
keep it coming!

WINDOWLAD said...

Hi Sunakshi,

This post is adorable... very simple and short yet worth a read... i liked the title: "life goes on"... !!! Cheers!!!:)

Thanks for visiting my li'l room of poetry...!!!:)

BTW, i'm following your blog not because i want you to follow mine as well but i enjoyed bein' here!!!:)

>Keep safe!!!:)

~kelvin

NISHANT NISCHAL said...

Sunakshi,
I arrived here from Margaret's "Come Along...." blog where you left a comment. You have posted some beautiful poems here. You have also mentioned that you love rain and stars, but I wonder if Delhi offers any of these two in plenty. But anyhow whatever Delhi gets, is enough for me. I do a little bit of photography in my free time. My next blogpost will be on Rain. :-)
I'd come back again to have a better look at your blog. Awaiting your visit at www.nischal.co.nr
TC. Love-Nishant Nischal.

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

OMG..that was such a nice story~! I really love your choice of words and your depth..and the lesson on it was really self-reflecting!!I will try to behold that!!I love it really :D

btw..hm..thanks for the suggestion but I prefer mystery thriller not romance when it comes to novels.^_^ hehe :3

Sunakshi said...

Shri-thanks,i'll try :)

Yvonne-i'll try my best,thanks ! :)

ambiguous_angel-thanks :)

kelvin-pleasure was all mine in visiting your blog,thanks for following me.that's really nice of ya :)

NISHANT NISCHAL-i'll try to visit your blog as soon as possible,thanks for stopping by.keep coming,you too take care :)

ayu-thanks,its really nice to know that message is clearly understood to all :)
btw itz ok, i too like mystery thriller,do suggest some good ones if you know :)

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

The message is count your blessings and it is loud and clear. Good thoughts you present here.

Sunakshi said...

vittaldas-thanks :)

Yunchun said...

"be happy and thankful to the lord above that you're blessed with wonderful gifts of life and make yourself capable of helping those who need you.be true to yourself,that's all what matters"..

it's beautiful n' nice story....

"At the age of 25,she was the loveliest and successful lady,with most beautiful heart in the world."

Sunakshi said...

yunchun-thanks for stopping by :)

sulagna said...

*pat on the back*

very well written baby :)

Sunakshi said...

sulagna di-thanksh .. candy for ya xD

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

awww..thanks I really appreciate your kind words.I'm okay now..Im smiling now bcoz of you :3

Oxymoron said...

hey...nice start to fiction..we tend to have the habit of thinking our problems are of the worst kind....but as your story puts it i guess we are all more blessed then we care to admit..

give my blog a visit sometime..

aritra the daydreamer said...

nice piece....
by the way
HAPPY NEW YEAR....

Sunakshi said...

ayu-glad to know that :)

oxymoron-thanks for stopping by :) yea,will certainly visit yours :)

aritra-thanks and wish you the same :)

Glenn Kun said...

Woot. I followed your blog. By the way, such an interesting post. ^^ Keep it up!

Sunakshi said...

glenn-thank you :)

Chocolate Lover said...

sunakshi di
you have baan awarded!!

Sunakshi said...

Shri thank you so much,love ya sista <3 :)

Samik Bhattacharya said...

its truly awesome!! i just have no other words... I follow the same theory actually since long and its really great to read such important things in story forms!!

Sunakshi said...

samik-thank u so much

ambika said...

Part ov it resembld d lyf..... Fr onc dint knew whethr its fiction or u......

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