Thursday, January 7, 2010

Tragedy xD

There is a certain magic in your style,
You probably have got the sweetest smile,
Your kind words light up her town,
Your unspoken words takes her to heaven,
You are the one who takes her breath away,
Your voice provides her sanity,
You are her new family,
You are her destiny,
You are miles away,
That is a tragedy.

P.S-I don't know,if its a poem o' not.i wrote it randomly! xD


♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

another nice random poem..i can relate to it >_< !!! crush is so far away..:P love your poem!!!!

AJai said...

YEs it is poetry coz thought it was random it still made sense. GOod stuff. Hope to see more. :)

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

aww... this is so beautiful :-)


I had great pleasure reading your poem, well done.


Amity Me said... if you've read my mind here...:)

random thoughts though, but it is a poem in itself!

I like it dear. Call me Big Sis...I am your follower, you are in my blog list.

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sulagna said...

the pic reminds me of bella and the first line reminds me of edward :D

An Ordinary Gal said...

rhymes for someone who lives far...rite ? well it was nice :)

ambiguous_angel said...

its definitely a poem.
and its a good one.
very well said sunakshi..

im expecting more of these..
really lovely and sweet:)

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

No poem can be random. A seemingly random poem also has a seed. The seed for this is 'longing'. You were either longing for something or someone, or dedicated this to someone who is longing for something. A sweet poem.

Ravindra Merthi said...

awesome post....i wonder tht ur writing polished post by post.

Few wordz n broad sense...i guss thatswhy u hav so many cuttie-cuttie awards.

PS: btw its bettr that HE/SHE is miles away otherwise she can't breath:)

Cursed♪♫ said...

Nice one!!!
I loved the picture!!

DiDo said...

sumtimes...randomness works.... its beautiful girl :)

Chocolate Lover said...

Awesome di!
loved it :))

Rohit Dassani said...

If that was a ramdom poem...i dont know what u gonna do if u sit back and it ok.... loved the poem....simple, sweet, and says a lot of words in itself..!! :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

paste a smile on your face~! ^_^

freelancer said...

poetry doesn't need to have any special form


Sunakshi said...

ayu-thanks,hope you get your crush very soon ^_^

ajai-thanks for stopping by :)

raaji-thanks ^_^

Yvonne-thanks :)

Amity-yea,i know that.i read your posts.thanks for the appreciation :)

sulagna di-perhaps xD

ordinary gal-well,yeap.just tried to give some words to picture.thanks ^_^

ambiguous_angel -thanks :)

vittaldas-well said,thanks :)

ravindra-thank you so much for da lovely comment :)

cursed-thanks for stopping by gal :)

Dido-thanks :)

shri-thanks :)

rohit-thanks :) you can go through my other poems to know what i can do if i sit back and write,hope you'll like them too xD

ayu-i am smiling,after getting so many comments,who won't?thanks :)

freelancer-thanks :)


Hi Sunakshi,

O, that was a love tragedy... very sad yet filled with deep emotions and hopes to raise... Well done!!!:) So glad to be here again...!!!:D

Good day!!!:)


Nipun said...

That was heart touching.
I dont knw what is happening coz all the posts I read today were emotional.
Is it an emotional outburst??
Just came across your blog..


Sunakshi said...

Kelvin-thanks :)

nipun-thanks for stopping by :)

Earth-ling said...

Love this.

Samik Bhattacharya said...

u write small things, little things but still why is it so awesome to read! u knw, i usually write LONG posts in my blog but very few people read em i guess I dont knw how to write a blog and i just write stories about my school my crush etc. your words are so simple yet capturing... you are really made for this!!!...

anki said...

hey....lovely poem...just the 1 suits my condition d most...awesome poem

Sunakshi said...

earth-ling-thanks :)

samik-thank you so much :)


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