Saturday, June 12, 2010

The butterfly may fly away someday,
Your smile will make me feel better in a way,
But there is a part of me which is cold,
The part which this mirror doesn't hold.


♪ Tharangni ♪ said...

wow!!! so amazing! ;)

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Beautiful words, very expressive,


Deepak said...

the part which this mirror doesn't hold.... so very well said sunakshi

god bless

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

awwwww... amazingly awesome o.o

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

awesomeness!! love the rhymes and meaning!

kratika said...

nice line keep up the good work.!!!!!!!!!!!

ambika said...

loved it...... :)


You are makin' me feel better after readin' each of your poems my friend... really really nice!!!:)

and hey, welcome back!!!:D

Thanks a ton for much appreciations you showered on mine!!!:D

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