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Sunday, February 6, 2011

May be deep inside she just want to be alone

The music was aloud and the room was filled with the high spirits , everyone was dancing on the floor enjoying the ample amount of smoke and alcohol.The wall was filled with colorful hand prints of the youngsters.There were little blue and red lights, making a mysteriously bright atmosphere.It wasn't like kim was there for the first time.In fact it was something which was now a part of her life,The one thing that completed her day.But today wasn't one among those days when she was in mood to party,dancing has always been her passion though.Million stories in seven days.plethora of  things  were going into her grain sized brain.Despite of numerous attempts to settle down in the surrounding ,she faced continuous failures.She sneaked out from there and started  to walk slowly on the city street,after a while without giving any second thought she sat on the side of road trying to collect her scattered thoughts at one place,taking control from filthy chit chatter and sack a shit people. This is she  trying to take back control of her life once again but may be deep inside she just want to be alone this time.





 

13 comments:

♠ Tharangni ♠ said...

lovely!!! i missed ur blog loads!!! X>

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

:)
It's the time for reflection, and picking up the pieces that might have fallen.

It's time to listen to herself.

Nice story.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

welcome to my world of poetry said...

A wonderful story, well written and a pleasure to read.

Yvonne.

Anoop KR said...

oh pls..dont b alone...okay..
keep spending time with ur frnds..ur best frnds.. :)

Sunakshi said...

Tharangi-Glad to know that :)

Blasphemous Aesthete-Yes.thanks :)

Yvonne-thank you. :)

Anoop-It is just a fiction :D

Sher said...

Lovely, I enjoyed your writing:)

xx

Beyond Horizon said...

Penned down very well the emotions of a mind going through turmoil and taking control of it
:)

Chandana said...

You just described all of us at some point of time in our lives :)

Loved it!

lizzie said...

beautifully written. I wish to have that loneliness too :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

being alone is sometimes helpful..it will makes you think or make up your mind :)

DiDo said...

Beautifully written sunkz...:)

Sunakshi said...

Thanks :)

ambika said...

Awesum.....

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