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Saturday, February 5, 2011

No more teardrops wait for a knock on the door,
Emotions veiled in darkness on the shore,
I lost my pride i lost my glow,
For me the sun rising is still most awaited show.






14 comments:

lizzie said...

For me the sun rising is still most awaited show.

lizzie said...

lovely line :)

Chocolate Lover said...

loved it =]

i hope u are ok ^_^

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

A new light is warm, shining down on you after the storm
Don't mourn what is gone, greet the dawn


:)
Very nice read.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Sunakshi said...

Lizzie and shriti-thank you. :)

Blasphemous Aesthete-well said..thanks :)

Ana said...

One of the many feelings i'm going through right now

Anoop KR said...

hey nice one.. :)

n y not allowed to copy the pic? is tat ur eye?? :D :P

n as usual no title for this post also.. hmmmmm :)

Sunakshi said...

Ana-oh.

Anoop-thanks :) and yes this is my eye :P err..yeah..i usually don't give titles to four liners :D

welcome to my world of poetry said...

A few words can say so much. lovely post.
Yvonne.

MothSmokeLover said...

Beautifully said!

Sunakshi said...

Yvonne and mothsmokelover-thank you. :)

WINDOWLAD said...

Sunakshi, those few lines are full of melancholy... i know you have been through rough times when your dad passed away and i am so sorry for that... please accept my late condolences my friend... I know you're a strong person and you can succeed evrything you desire... i hope you are feeling better... take care and joy always!!!^^

~Kelvin

Sunakshi said...

Kelvin-yes,I'm better now.thank you. :)

Chefpoowie said...

nice blog :)

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