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Sunday, June 26, 2011

I wonder over the feeling that eat me inside,
Yet nothing come to my mind,
Lonely i am not i know,
Yet why does my despair grow?

11 comments:

welcome to my world of poetry said...

An excellent 4 liner. I could see the message in this.

Have a peaceful Sunday.
Yvonne.

☆ ayu☆ said...

feeling the same :<

Chocolate Lover said...

I feel the same :/ <3

Lizzie said...

so brief so complete.

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

:)
Poignant. And beautiful.

RicAdeMus said...

It's so hard sometimes to understand what we're looking for when we feel like we are not looking for anything.

Pranavam Ravikumar a.k.a. Kochuravi said...

Very nice!!!

ambika said...

Nyc 1....

Valli said...

Beautiful 4 liner ;)

Valli said...

Sad climax....:(
I wish she could have thought him a lesson for hurting her so badly!

But yeah, It's just the state of mind.....Just within seconds she took a hasty decision and ended her precious life :(

Nice story!

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Oops...I was going through all blogs...and I suddenly saw my comment :0
Lol....The above comment was for another write in another blog....accidentally typed here :(

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