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Thursday, November 10, 2011

The butterfly effect -part 1

"ugh! this sucks.." she thought to herself, "isn't there a place here, where you can sit, without being probed at like, that's-a-disturbed-girl sitting, all by herself"...well, no there isn't. At least not in this place. She chose Cafe Coffee Day.
"Err why they always have to put up sitting arrangements for two or four..what if a person want to sit alone?"
"One lemon iced tea please",she ordered..
"Anything else ma'am?"
"No thank you."
"It will take 5 minutes ma'am." , The guy added smile and left.
She sat quietly,staring the phone flashing 11 missed calls..waiting for the tea she ordered.no matter wherever you go,technology never fails to say "I'm always there."As she sat there..she saw several people...some waiting for someone,some friends,one trying to explain other why he want break up,one trying to make other understand why he loves her so much,one newly married couple..one family with a baby sitting on table trying to mess with the sandwiches and coke.
She was alone but she liked it that way..she had all her time...avoiding all the questions she didn't wish to answer,all the questions she didn't wish to hear,all the questions she wanted to leave and move on..avoiding all the questions..

To be continued...




20 comments:

Raajii said...

It's for so long that she can be alone before it starts to eat her up.

welcome to my world of poetry said...

An interesting read I await the next part,

Yvonne.

Arpit Rastogi said...

A very nice write up.. :)
Will be waiting for the next part! :)

Your writing style has captured my attention.. Its quite interesting. :)

Happy Blogging! :)

Arpit Rastogi said...

*★.• The moment you get attached to things you screw it up! The challenge of life is to appreciate everything and attach yourself to nothing. *★.•


Have you written the above lines by yourself??
If yes.. Then I am your Fan right here right now!!! :) :)

So fucking true!!!

Sunakshi said...

True,Raaji :)

Yvonne I hope you like the next part too :)

Arpit Thank you :) Haha no sorry but i didn't write that quote myself,I read it somewhere and couldn't get it out of my head. :D

RicAdeMus said...

Very good! I'm looking forward t the next part too.

I used to not like being in a restaurant alone, but I kind of like it now.

Red Handed said...

Ah Interesting.. I too feel tht these cafe's shud have a table for JUST ONE!

Rahul Bhatia said...

Interesting read... wait to see what follows..

sulagna ™ said...

one ice tea please..someone is all grown up and sofisticated in her writting..lovely

Beyond Horizon said...

The time we want to be with own self.

short but very narrative. :)

Reicha Ahluwalia said...

Sometimes its good to sit alone and look at the world around. It brings a little coziness within [personal experience] :)

Well i am eager for the next part because i am more interested in knowing what the author feels like

Take care !!

Arpit Rastogi said...

@ Sunakshi :
Whatever.. i still like your writing ishtyle.. :P

Keep it coming! :)

Being Pramoda... said...

Interesting start.. it often happens in relations..

Post the next one soon..:)

Sunakshi said...

RicAdeMus Thank you..next part is coming soon :)

Red handed Sometimes we all wish i guess..:)

Rahul bhatia thank you :)

sulagna di That's a lovely compliment..thank you :)

Beyond horizon- next part is coming soon :) TY

Sunakshi said...

Reicha i agree :) yeah i hope u like d next part too :)

Arpit :D

Promoda di sure thank you.. :)

Chocolate Lover said...

<3 <3 When will you post the next one?? D:
Post it soon <3

Sunakshi said...

Ty shriti :)

its me!!! sharan :) said...

huh...I always like to sit alone like her...where nobody knows me and nobody will give a damn about what I am thinking...but I get a very little chance...(there's a reason for that)...

Well you tweeted me the part 2 so here I am reading the first part too. :)

stay connected!!!
its me!!! sahran :)

Sunakshi said...

@jay thanks..yes it happens rarely..busy life. :)

☆ ayu☆ said...

i have no idea about the title but it gives off an interesting and intriguing effect on me..i wish this is a love story..i feel that the main chara is a lonesome,shunned-herself-from-the-world girl..i wish someone will make her realize things.. like about happiness etc.

well anyway that's just my thoughts..hehe..i cant wait for the next :D

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