Sunday, November 13, 2011

The butterfly effect -part 2

The chair in front of her moved and a little stranger took her place.
"Is it a butterfly on your hand?" she touched the tattoo inked on her wrist."please"she insisted.
"Yeah,you liked it?" she smiled and asked.
"It is awesome..Please tell my dad to get this done on my hand too.It is so colorful."
"Haha but do you know the pain is unbearable."
"I'm a strong girl you know.I can make my neighbor weep but still i think i might want to have butterfly on my hand when I'll turn 12.I'm in no hurry.Please tell dad to allow me and don't tell him it hurts,he can't see me in pain." she smiled.
"Cool!so when are you turning 12?Your dad loves you a lot."
"Ya he do but i love him more than he love me.My birthday is on 21st feb and I'll be 12 after 3 long years" she flashed her white teeth.
"Lovely!whats your name?" she asked.
"Amy sen and whats yours?"
"Sumedha.." .... at the same moment, the waiter served her order of lemon iced tea.

To be continued...

 Image courtesy : Google Baba :D



Rahul Bhatia said...

A sweet post... wait to see unfolding of events!

its me!!! sharan :) said...

he he he...12 years after 3 long years :) :) :)

btw I hope the little girl will not be a problem for the bigger one, as she wanted to stay alone...and its just a guess, "does the bigger girl share her problem with the younger one???"

stay connected!!!
its me!!! sharan :)

Reicha Ahluwalia said...

Ok so finally the names and the reason for the title are introduced.
Good going :)

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Equally as good as the first part most enjoyable to read.


Chocolate Lover said...

So sweet :3

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

I just read both the parts :) I'm looking forward to the next one :) it's coming out well!

Sunakshi said...

Rahul bhatia thank you :)

Jay nope..nothing like that..already pareshan ko kyu rulana :D

Reicha Thanks :)

Sunakshi said...

Yvonne m so glad after reading comment..thank you :)

shriti <3

philo thank you :)

Rachit said...

good one... you keep me hooked busy reading... waiting for the other parts.. :)

Weakest LINK

RicAdeMus said...

Very well written. Being a dad, I'm hoping she reverses the numbers and waits until she's 21 to get a tattoo. =)

Muhammad Israr said...

lets hope you turn 12 soon :P

personally i dont like tattoos and all these punk things :(

Arpit Rastogi said...

Sweet..! :)

What happens next! :)

Plz share it all at once now!!!

Anonymous said...

I wonder why is this coming in parts... I'll save my comment until all of them are done. ;)

Sunakshi said...

Rachit thanks for stopping by :)

Ricademus hahaha :)

Muhammad I like it but..everyone has different opinion..i appreciate it too. :)

Arpit sure,next one would be last!

Mohitshroff It is coming in parts because i randomly write and post.. :D

R-A-J said...

Aaah.. interesting :)

liked the adjoinin pic.. is tht u?

Intriguing post, Sunakshi... :)

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

Thank you for your comment :) I'm waiting for your next post :)

Sunakshi said...

Raj I have already mentioned below that image is taken from google.Thank you for ur comment :)

philo,I'll write it soon :)

Pria Rao said...

Sweet.. 12 after 3 long years? :D

Beyond Horizon said...

First look of the butterfly...beautiful :)

Pop Champagne said...

ohh can't wait to read the second part of the story!

హను said...


Sunakshi said...

Pria thanks :)

Beyond horizon thanks :D

Pop n హను ty :)

Cяystal said...

Sumedha is the name of a very good friend of mine :D
12 is a cute age hehe. Waiting for more. xx

A S said...

cute post, looking fwd to the nest part

nice tattoo!

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