Monday, November 30, 2009

Go to the sleep.

O noble creature,
Go to the sleep,
Visit the place where you always wanted to be,
Far away from this agony,
Beyond the world of despair,
Where you could be you,
On your very own land,
Where you never have to say hello to goodbye,
Where there is nothing to learn,
No chapter to teach you anything,
Where you could be free,
Where you can actually breathe,
Where right and wrong never existed,
Where tears are befriended with concern,
Where fight and hurts don't live,
Where only love is all around,
Where pure hearts surrounds,
Where your silence could be understood,
Where light never faded,
Where souls were never traded,
Where happiness doesn't live apart,
Where  you can live before you die.


sulagna said...

'where pure hearts surround"

babe this is an utopian fantasy and the closest we can get is our homes with family..

well written ya !!

Ravindra Merthi said...


Where your silence could be understood,
Where light never faded

beautifully crafted lines.
glad to see that m in ur followers list...

Sunakshi said...

sulagna di-um agree,thanks :)

ravindra-same here,thanks :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

thanks for the comment..ill be following you now! pls. follow me as IM gonna read your blogs everyday! wow!im so excited to know you better..anyway..thanks^_^

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

and btw! nice poem! so into writing poems as well..anyway..that was really great!

Sunakshi said...

ayu-i told ya,i liked your blog very much.i am following it too,pleasure is all mine.i'll get to read good stuff :)i read your poems as well,couldn't comment coz i was running short of tym,u're a nyc poet ^_^

celestialrays said...

lovely! following you now :-)

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Sunakshi, the last line was the best punch of all..wellll expressed dear..:) CUte..

Sunakshi said...

celestalrays-glad to noe tht,thanks :)

pramoda di-thanks ^_^

DiDo said...

Where you can live before you die

Deadly line....sunakshiii u r tooo good...

Sunakshi said...

dido-thanks :)

. said...

"Oh my sleep apnea,
The silence between..
Take me to the world where
dawn waited for me to wake up!"

A wonderful caper with words to say something that resides in everybody's heart.Deep enough to remember. :)

Sunakshi said...

^ - thanks for stopping by :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

hello..thanks for the comment in my glad you like it coz i really adore your poems..i haven't read any poems as good as yours..really..XD there's some sense of deepness in your poems that really caught me straight from the heart..thanks again..

Sunakshi said...

ayu-thank you so much :)

anki said...

hey sunakshi...dis is really nice...thanks for dis 1...i m in search of dat place???? hope vl find it soon...waise i am happy and wid pure hearts when i m alone..thanks again

Sunakshi said...

anki-thanks for stopping by :)

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