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Wednesday, June 9, 2010

Despite of all my flaws,
You took me the way i was,
Comforted me million times,
When i wanted to cry till i feel no more.
You made my journey so easy,
I hardly remember what made me feel dizzy,
My eyes sparkled in wonderment each time,
How perfect your timings were.
You fought with the unseen attacks,
Protecting from the shadows trailing behind,
You always kept me safe,
When fears started to override.

 

 


11 comments:

ambika said...

hmph........ no words.....
bt cnt feel d words......sumwat gone thru....
ur poes r so awesum dat it makes me speechless fr minutes.....wonderin h cum u get such feelins in d poem or whethr its me whux feelin it awl....
wid d span f tym u became my bestie n my bst poet.....

RHYTHM AND RHYME said...

Wonderful words, well written,

Take care.
Yvonne.

Bethany Elizabeth said...

This is beautiful - and the picture is too. I'd say more, but really, it'd just be gushing. :)

Pramoda Meduri said...

Hi.. that's a nice way of expressing the gratitude towards the heart which beats for yu..nice one..:)

WritingsForLife said...

Its a blessing to have someone like that :-)

beautifully put :-)

Ordinary Gal said...

so very nicely written..enjoy the beautiful moments wid dat special person :)

DiDo said...

As alwaysss this made me smile.... hope i get sumone like tht too :P

itsyvitsy said...

This one is a nice poem. The warmth of that special someone being there for you is clearly visible. Nice work.

tharangni said...

Q:: Is this poem to be continued?
(asking co its awesome!! X) ]

Shriti said...

awesome! :))

kelvin s.m. said...

WOW!!! - is the best word for that... much worth of a praise!!!:)

Have a blessed day!!!:D

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