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Tuesday, September 28, 2010

Welcome to my life

Welcome to my life,
Its nothing more than a strife,
But i am surviving,
Just like the gentle bird in morning.
I am the diamond glints on the snow,
I am the wind that blow,
Even if you stand near my grave and weep someday,
Please don't.Because i will nearby you each day.
Numb heart at times fades the crispness,
Embracing the spineless thoughts of nothingness,
Mind sometimes ponder over weird lines,
Casting a bad spell over the life that shines.
Yet i believe life is worth living,
We begin walking only after falling,
Everyday can be different,
If you are willing to accept that nothing is permanent.

25 comments:

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Excellent poem, slowly changes do occur in life that we hardly reconise it at the time.

Take care.
Yvonne.

Oliver said...

Happiness and hope: perfect. =]

Thanks for sharing your poem!

♫♪♥Lonely Dreamer♥♪♫ said...

Beautiful !!! :)
Loved every bit of it!

DiDo said...

Superb sunkz :) as alwaysss

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Nice lines, and a good lesson learned... life is too short to stop and wail over what is past.

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

beautiful as always..i really agree with you esp. the last lines.."Yet i believe life is worth living,
We begin walking only after falling,
Everyday can be different,
If you are willing to accept that nothing is permanent. " love it!

Komal Ali said...

I gotta learn.

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

beautiful

loved it di :))

Unruly Rebel said...

beautiful.. :)

RicAdeMus said...

great work, I really like the message.

In the back of my mind, I occasionally have the thought that we need to forgive people who make a mistake (but not if it's the same mistake over and over) because everyone who stands-up is bound to fall at some point. But I can't write it in a way that would make anyone want to read it.

Madhu said...

awesome...really!

ambika said...

inspirin 1......... :D
i loved it...... its motivatin..... :)

Sidrah said...

I loved it =)
shouldn't lose hope, have faith instead. Stuff happens but life goes on.

Esp love this line "I am the diamond glints on the snow"

<3

The Silent Speaker said...

"Everyday can be different,
If you are willing to accept that nothing is permanent."

Beautifully written. It almost hurts to read it though. But I do believe in the last two lines because thats what keeps me sane during my sad and low days.

I hope all is good at your end. Thanks for dropping by on my blog. :)

WINDOWLAD said...

..worthy of praise my friend... very uplifting... and O, it has a title... "welcome to my life"... great... and i'm very pleased to meet you... a blessed Sunday!!!:D

..(^^)b...

>Kelvin

♫♪♥Lonely Dreamer♥♪♫ said...

Thank you for your comment :)
Glad you liked the poem!

Colorful said...

Ah what a lovely poem !! And with maturity you have transformed the negative start ending it up with positive spirits !! Quite apreciative ! Admire it lot !

aritra the daydreamer said...

visiting your blog after a long time...and i had a lot of reading to you..But its a very good experience..Thanks...

विवेक Call me Vish !! said...

आपकी पोस्ट पढने के बाद बस यही कह सकता hun .......
काम सब गैर-ज़रूरी हैं जो सब करते हैं
और हम कुछ नहीं करते हैं, ग़ज़ब करते हैं.....

मेरे ब्लॉग पर भी स्वागत है ...... पधारें !

जय हो मंगलमय हो

sakhii•• said...

awesome awesome awesome!!
too gud :D

Valli said...

Beautiful poem..:)

Valli said...

Very nicely written..:)
LIked it..:D

WINDOWLAD said...

May you have more love, peace and light in this time of the year my friend.

MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!^^

P.S. I have left something for you. Please click here.

GOD Bless!^^

~Kelvin

muskan said...

nice post.

vaisakhi said...

truly beautiful...perfect blend of happiness n hope....loved it...simply great.:)

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