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Tuesday, September 28, 2010

Welcome to my life

Welcome to my life,
Its nothing more than a strife,
But i am surviving,
Just like the gentle bird in morning.
I am the diamond glints on the snow,
I am the wind that blow,
Even if you stand near my grave and weep someday,
Please don't.Because i will nearby you each day.
Numb heart at times fades the crispness,
Embracing the spineless thoughts of nothingness,
Mind sometimes ponder over weird lines,
Casting a bad spell over the life that shines.
Yet i believe life is worth living,
We begin walking only after falling,
Everyday can be different,
If you are willing to accept that nothing is permanent.

23 comments:

RHYTHM AND RHYME said...

Excellent poem, slowly changes do occur in life that we hardly reconise it at the time.

Take care.
Yvonne.

Oliver said...

Happiness and hope: perfect. =]

Thanks for sharing your poem!

PhilO♥ said...

Beautiful !!! :)
Loved every bit of it!

DiDo said...

Superb sunkz :) as alwaysss

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Nice lines, and a good lesson learned... life is too short to stop and wail over what is past.

Komal Ali said...

I gotta learn.

Shriti said...

beautiful

loved it di :))

Unruly Rebel said...

beautiful.. :)

Ricademus said...

great work, I really like the message.

In the back of my mind, I occasionally have the thought that we need to forgive people who make a mistake (but not if it's the same mistake over and over) because everyone who stands-up is bound to fall at some point. But I can't write it in a way that would make anyone want to read it.

Unknown said...

awesome...really!

ambika said...

inspirin 1......... :D
i loved it...... its motivatin..... :)

Sidrah said...

I loved it =)
shouldn't lose hope, have faith instead. Stuff happens but life goes on.

Esp love this line "I am the diamond glints on the snow"

<3

MothSmokeLover said...

"Everyday can be different,
If you are willing to accept that nothing is permanent."

Beautifully written. It almost hurts to read it though. But I do believe in the last two lines because thats what keeps me sane during my sad and low days.

I hope all is good at your end. Thanks for dropping by on my blog. :)

kelvin s.m. said...

..worthy of praise my friend... very uplifting... and O, it has a title... "welcome to my life"... great... and i'm very pleased to meet you... a blessed Sunday!!!:D

..(^^)b...

>Kelvin

PhilO♥ said...

Thank you for your comment :)
Glad you liked the poem!

Anonymous said...

Ah what a lovely poem !! And with maturity you have transformed the negative start ending it up with positive spirits !! Quite apreciative ! Admire it lot !

aritra the daydreamer said...

visiting your blog after a long time...and i had a lot of reading to you..But its a very good experience..Thanks...

Unknown said...

आपकी पोस्ट पढने के बाद बस यही कह सकता hun .......
काम सब गैर-ज़रूरी हैं जो सब करते हैं
और हम कुछ नहीं करते हैं, ग़ज़ब करते हैं.....

मेरे ब्लॉग पर भी स्वागत है ...... पधारें !

जय हो मंगलमय हो

Sakhi. said...

awesome awesome awesome!!
too gud :D

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Beautiful poem..:)

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Very nicely written..:)
LIked it..:D

kelvin s.m. said...

May you have more love, peace and light in this time of the year my friend.

MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!^^

P.S. I have left something for you. Please click here.

GOD Bless!^^

~Kelvin

Vaisakhi said...

truly beautiful...perfect blend of happiness n hope....loved it...simply great.:)

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