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Wednesday, February 22, 2012

The butterfly effect - part 5 (The end)

"Oh ok..By the way I'm still waiting for my chhillo.." Amy dramatically put head in her hands.
"Chhillo?oh you mean Mochachillo...I'm sorry..you had to wait" he laughed.
"Wait a minute..excuse me..one Mochachillo and Cappuccino please...yeah...nothing else..thank you"
Taking a separate table won't be a great idea.It might be rude as well..but what if she feel I'm disturbing her?Err.His mind started struggling with unnecessary thoughts..
"Please join us..Nobody has given you punishment here" , Sumedha smiled and said.
"You haven't changed in all these years..Still expert in passing comments." he took a seat.
"Yeah somethings are best to be left unchanged."
"How are you,what are you upto these days?"
"Absolutely fine.I'm working as a fashion designer...what about you?"
"Superb!Finally you made it..Glad to know...I'm software engineer after a hectic journey."
"By the way,Great tattoo.When did you get it done?"
"Thanks.Its almost one and half year."
 "Oh i see,Beautiful it is."
Waiter served their order..
He pierced the brittle shell of her self defense.Did he ask it purposely?she wondered...It reminded her about the day when she told him once she want to get her wrist inked with a heart..their initials written in it..i.e PS and he explained why she should get butterflies instead of heart.They had a long one hour conversation debating on that..which finally ended on a note that she'll go for butterflies because it suits not only her but both of them.She was done with her tea and realized that she was getting late for an important meeting.She must leave.
"I'm sorry I need to go.There's an important meeting actually.."
 "No problem..Look after yourself and stay in touch...."
"Sure.see you around."
"Would you mind giving your number?" It wasn't planned..just out of nowhere,all of sudden words just flowed.
"Err..okay."
They exchanged numbers and she left.

Days passed and there was no call,message or missed call.

On one fine evening,he managed to gather the courage and dialed her number.His fingers tightened on the cell phone when the most beautiful voice said "hello".He expected that she won't pick up his call But she did..he thanked lord under his breathe.
"Hi.Please carefully listen to what i want to say...Its been  5 years and today is the same date we said good bye to each other.You were clever enough to hide well and I couldn't find you despite of all the possible trials.Seemed like you already moved on.I knew it was my fault that i let you go so easily..But believe me,I haven't been able to lead a meaningful life either.At first i thought it is all fine but later i realized it left an everlasting effect.My thoughts still rush towards picture of you which is engraved in my heart.I got serious in life so that i can be with you.I started saving...so that whenever we are together again i can have enough to fulfill your needs...I quit smoking so that I can spend my entire life with you..After you left my company changed..I changed for better but my life became worse.."Those 'I LOVE YOU' which once i started thinking were matter of daily routine and force..I began to miss it every time....His voice started shattering...Not that i didn't try to move on..I did..But nothing worked...Now when my family is looking for a match for me,I want to introduce you to them...So that We can be together again,Only if you forgive me."
There was a long pause...she put her hands over her eyes,childish gesture,tears trickle from under her drooping lashes.
Pin drop silence on both sides.
"You think it just happened to you..I had gone through the same pain.I removed all the traces because i thought that's what you wanted..I crave to listen to your insane talks almost every now and then.I try to move on but at the end everything brings me home,brings me to you...I often blame myself for trying to change you which lead to the disaster but i swear i just alarmed you by regular warnings because i didn't want to see you in any trouble..I'm soo..rry.I want to spend my rest of my life with you too."

Ten year later..

They are one of the most beautiful and responsible married couple...he still love her with the same intensity ...she still don't let him spend much on her Rather make him richer with her brightest smile each day.












13 comments:

mohitshroff said...

All's well that ends well. :)
Happy Ending indeed. :)

vish thakur said...

as always superb....communicative !! keep writing and plz visit on my blog and share your comment !


have a nice time...

✿Sie✿ said...

so well written..I was just reading all through out with a smile on my face and ok a *giggle*..thank you for leaving a comment on my site Sunakshi..waiting for the next one ;)

Rahul Bhatia said...

Sunakshi, I read the first part and then did not follow! Today, I read all the parts in one go! This is beautiful writing and a simple story of love so well narrated! Keep writing:) Thanks a lot for following my blog..

I do, I do. said...

I assume this butterfly effect is spreading all over the blogspot!!

You've written it very well. Beautiful!

Love.
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I do, I do. said...

PS I'm your new follower! :)

Muhammad Israr said...

hmmmm i dont believe in lovestories anymore but you wrote it superb... and made us wait for so long in between... but i am glad you are back with a bang... :)

My Never Ending Thoughts... said...

Wow.. I read all the parts of "The butterfly effect" in one go and i truly loved it sooo much.. Loved all the fictional characters you have created:) Good job:)

Megha Sarin said...

Love it! :)

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paayal sharma said...

I started reading this all with ma smile n ma smile is still intact thyr on ma lips till the end...GBU sakhi...luv u must encourage u more n more cummon gooooooooo baby...luv to read more n more :)

kinara said...

I simply loved it gal!:):)
I would like to read dis..
you're here ::
http://kshahzworld.blogspot.in/2012/03/unheard-voice-can-encourage-you.html

Sunakshi said...

Thank you so much everyone :)

Ashish Kumar Srivastava said...

Sunakshi..rally beautifully written :) one of the best blog posts I've come across, heart touching :)

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