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Monday, March 12, 2012

Follow your heart but hello,Take your brain!

There is a day,
When we cannot find our way,
Cocooned in isolation,
We forget the celebration.
What we reap is what we sow,
Somewhat like the place where caterpillars grow,
In rough emotions,Trapped we feel,
For its the heart which brings the seal.
Shouldn't brain get any chance here?
After all heart rules in every sphere,
I choose being practical then,
Its better to be okay than feeling like rotten egg.



17 comments:

*Dark Angel* said...

wow! this is just awesome. I like how its short yet interesting. nice :)

sumukh bansal said...

interesting..... :)

sawan said...

the thin line here is tht being practical is also highly dependent on perceptions which essentially makes it very hard to define!

welcome to my world of poetry said...

There is a thin line between the two, mostly I follow my heart.
Loved the verse, excellent reading.

Yvonne.

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Beautiful poem...I loved this line...Its better to be okay than feeling like rotten egg

Whuaat? said...

True that! How long will you let your heart rule anyway. When there's no way out, you ought to get the head in the picture!

Raajii said...

You cant really follow your heart and take your brain, you know. That's not how it works. If only it did...

Red Handed said...

Great lines!!
If Only it was easy t be that practical...is only the heart wasnt tht strong to overpower the mind!

I do, I do. said...

Act like a lady, Think like a Man! :) Simple as that!

Rahul Bhatia said...

Beautiful composition, Sunakshi:)

Jayendra Sharan said...

Yes..
I agree with you...
I do this too..

:)

Risha Kalra said...

If only the heart understands! :)
Nicely written!

Kinara :) said...

Excellent:)
<3

Chocolate Lover said...

Love every line of this poem. o:

Pria Rao said...

Wish hearts follow brains :-)

Megha Sarin said...

Love it! <3 <3 Short and simple!

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Sunakshi said...

Thank you everyone :)

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