Saturday, February 13, 2010

Unsaid script

The faint scent of time whispers something i don't recognize,
I fail to recognize who am i now,
I don't understand the reason for my existence,
I  barely recognize the reflection in the mirror,
Nor i know the reflection in the water,
I stumble and fall yet i fail to scream.
I want to live not just breathe,
I want to take my last breathe in solace,
Though my thoughts are scattered,
Though my life's dairy is messed up,
Yet i've this feeling deep inside,
Some day everything will be alright.
I might turn into ashes that day,
Nobody would get an excuse to curse me everyday,
I'll be in world mystery of which nobody knows,
Some call it heaven,
Some afraid and name it hell,
But it would be my final destination for sure.



So very sad, I do hope this is just fiction and not how you really feel.
Take care.

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

awww..i missed your poems..>.<

this is really a good one..tyhe depiction of emtions and the usage of words are simply astounding..i ran out of superlatives just to compliment this

happy valentine's day
and happy Chinese new year~! :D

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Chocolate Lover said...

sad but awesome :))

Amity said...

Is that how you're feeling dear?

Come out of your shell, and take a look around you, isn't it beautiful?

Life is beautiful, so many told me coz i also often feel that way, too!

Hugs dear!

P.S. My eyes is straining with the font color dear! Kindly use white as in your older posts? Thanks dear!


Hi Sunakshi,

This is indeed very sad and full of melancholy.... yet it really portrays the reality we all must face when we meet the end of our roll....!!!:(

P.S. Thanks for your greetings and appreciations on my works... very much appreciated!!!:)

I hope all is well in your world!!!:)

Good day!!!:)

Keep safe!!!:)


Vittaldas Prabhu said...

It is quite dark in one sense, though it does not explicitly refer to darkness. I like it because there is an urge in the protagonist to break free and live in his/her own terms. To live and die gracefully.

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