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Wednesday, February 24, 2010



I see the pale melting moon in dark night,
I stare at the single star shining bright tonight,
It whispers a melody which i never heard,
It mocks the unending chatter that plagues the mind.

14 comments:

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

its the first time ive read a four liner poem from you..nicely done...love the first line :)

Deepak K. Narula said...

Very nice ...

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Wonderful words yet again, most enjoyable, thanks for sharing.

Yvonne:

Chandrika Shubham said...

Nice four liner. :)

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

With so many stars in the sky and the eerie silence gives the feeling of a hushed chit-chat among the stars. You feel they are talking about you. You feel conscious that they know everything that is going on in your mind. Wow! I feel the goosebumps!

ambiguous_angel said...

love this.
so brief yet so deep.

and love the photo too.
is that you?

☆Tharangni☆ said...

OMG!! This is one amazing 4-liner!!!! ^_^

Sunakshi said...

ayu-if you're talking about the type,then certainly you wouldn't have heard about it because i've created it :P i oftenly love writing four liners :) thanks :)

deepak,yvonne,chandrika-thanks :)

vittal-Bingo!you're too good in interpreting the meaning brother :)

angel-thanks :) nope that certainly isn't me. :)

Tharangni-thanks :D

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

I can so relate to this tonight. Sigh.

Pria said...

noce one.. liked the first 2 lines.. :)

WINDOWLAD said...

Hi Sunakshi,

Very very nicely written... and well complimented... it's really good to be here again after a week of accomplishing my job as a student... haha!!!:) Thanks for always dropping by and appreciating my works!!!:)

Good day!!!:)

Blessings!!!:)

>kelvin

Ubaid said...

Love it :)

Amity said...

beautiful lines dear....

re: ur upcoming exams, just give your best shot!

I could read better with this color combination, white font over a black background!

Much better than any other color!

As for template suggestions, I have no idea since my friend-bloggers are the one making templates for me...:)

Koo said...

Loved it! Very deep :)

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