Monday, February 15, 2010

She finally got the lyrics of the song,
The song which was deep inside her heart,
Her heart was so pure,
So pure she herself was. 


Saras said...

Good one!


Lovely words, so soothing and gentle.


♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

very short but meaningful :) love it..


This one is so cheerful... very relieving and captivating... i wonder why you always make untitled poems? anyhow, i enjoyed the read... thanks!!!:)

Good day!!!:)

Keep safe!!!:)


Amity said...


This is a very hopeful write this time!

Keep up!

That's me, too!

Anonymous said...

Short but sweet ! awesome !

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

So, are the brighter days coming by? I get that hint in this piece right here. I hope it is true for your own good.

Whatever your mindset is, your poems have moved me a lot. They might be a reflection of your innermost or darkest thoughts, but they still need to be portrayed properly. I loved them all.

Sourav !!! said...

Let the lyrics lead you to a never ending beautiful journey :)
Wishes !

Sourav .. in love with me and life!! :)

Madhu said...

that was somethin eh?? CUTE!

☆Ths[Schrei]☆ said...

really nice, and melancholic too, right??? :/ and a very sweet four liner also! :D

@Sunakshi: First of, Im really sorry about this late reply! Well I Too am an armature poet. As a matter of fact, I'd begun writing em this year only, i.e 2009-9th grade. But I must say, that even though you may not write the titles, your poems are really really very nice!!!! ^_^
(As in reply to my post)

☆Ths[Schrei]☆ said...

P.S : I really like your post(s) images too! They're really nicee!!^_^

☆Ths[Schrei]☆ said...

@Sunakshi: Well I like em too, but I wanna change my pattern! I always reason the next line of my poem with, 'for' or 'as' or 'like' or 'and'! I really wanna make them to sentences you know!! So I always try to change my style! :'(!

>>And hey, am following you too(accept the req.)!!! :)! btw, even if you didn't get it, I had in my profile lined anyway!! :D
(As in reply to my post)

Nothingman said...

Sweet, i like it. Says a lot in few words! :D


You can check out my poems at :)

S. Etole said...

you have a lovely song to sing ...

~*~ Jal Pari ~*~ said...

The song is just perfect!

Short, sweet and perfect.

Pria said...

wow.. short n sweet one.. :) new here.. liked the expressions in ur poetry.. :)

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