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Saturday, February 13, 2010

Faint glimmer of hope



My hands are open to embrace the cold winds passing by,
I guess this tough time will soon fly away,
I have no idea how and when,
Not just smiles but laughters will accompany me then.
May be i am not sure who i am now,
May be i don't know who i'll be ,
But trust on this note of mine,
When i say my thirst to live never dies.
Yeah i started breaking,
No doubt i started stumbling,
I suffocate in the shadows at times,
I wander in silent screams many times.
Pure exhilaration is not what am i expecting to arrive,


I know nothing can ever stop strive,
Yet there is a hope for a real smile,
I guess something better would be awaiting on other side.













13 comments:

☆Ths[Schrei]☆ said...

@Sunakshi: Sure! Thanks! And hey, I do follow your blog! :D
(As in reply to my post)

And hey, nice one too!!
but, why isn't there a title to your post???

DiDo said...

May be i am not sure who i am now,
May be i don't know who i'll be.




WOw.. sunakshii...

guess something better would be awaiting on other side.

i'm hoping too :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

another nice and sad poem here..i guess you yesterday's poem and today are somewhat similar in terms of a person wanting to live a better live on the other world..?

i really see the sadness here..it reminds me of my depression today :(

(P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)

Chandrika Shubham said...

Beautiful pic. Smily is do cute. :)

Beautiful words woven beautifully. :) I enjoyed reading it. :)

Chocolate Lover said...

WoOoOoOoW!! awesome di :))


Happy valentine's day ;)

ambiguous_angel said...

love it!
really nice..
especially the last line..

I guess something better would be awaiting on other side.

Creativity!! said...

Awesome......

nipun_garodia said...

beautiful!!! The poem is a true depiction of the current phase of my life.

Amity said...

Hi Sunakshi;

You must have read my mind... :)

Me, too, like you, is struggling who really I am while I am already in my middle life, but still have hopes that I will find my real self on the other side...:)

Very touching post dear...:)

Re: your wish that I give you some tips on writing acros, you can have lessons here: just click on the link and once you have tried your hand on it, link your acros here, too! Goodluck and hope to see you at Acrostic Only!

http://acrosticonly.blogspot.com/

Love,

Big Sis Amity

WINDOWLAD said...

Hi Sunakshi,

Despite of the sad emotions mixed in this poem still there's hope attached in each word... very well done!!!:)

Good day!!!:)

Smile!!!:)

>kelvin

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Beautiful lines. I sit here and read these lines with a feeling of awe. The voice within has taken a physical form in these words. Hope has been highlighted and hope is all that there is in these lines. I am touched.

Sunakshi said...

Dido-thanks :)

ayu-bingo! hmph.. thanks for stopping by :)

chandrika-nice to know that,thanks for visiting :)

Sunakshi said...

shri-aw thanks and same to you :)

angel-thanks :)

creativity-thanks for stopping by :)

nipun-you're the only one who can relate to it.hope things get fine on your way soon :)

kelvin-thanks :)

amity sis-i hope the same,thanks a lot :)

vittaldas-I guess thats what real poetry is.the one which can be felt from bottom.i am obliged to know that :)

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