Saturday, February 13, 2010

Faint glimmer of hope

My hands are open to embrace the cold winds passing by,
I guess this tough time will soon fly away,
I have no idea how and when,
Not just smiles but laughters will accompany me then.
May be i am not sure who i am now,
May be i don't know who i'll be ,
But trust on this note of mine,
When i say my thirst to live never dies.
Yeah i started breaking,
No doubt i started stumbling,
I suffocate in the shadows at times,
I wander in silent screams many times.
Pure exhilaration is not what am i expecting to arrive,

I know nothing can ever stop strive,
Yet there is a hope for a real smile,
I guess something better would be awaiting on other side.


☆Ths[Schrei]☆ said...

@Sunakshi: Sure! Thanks! And hey, I do follow your blog! :D
(As in reply to my post)

And hey, nice one too!!
but, why isn't there a title to your post???

DiDo said...

May be i am not sure who i am now,
May be i don't know who i'll be.

WOw.. sunakshii...

guess something better would be awaiting on other side.

i'm hoping too :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

another nice and sad poem here..i guess you yesterday's poem and today are somewhat similar in terms of a person wanting to live a better live on the other world..?

i really see the sadness reminds me of my depression today :(

(P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)

Chandrika Shubham said...

Beautiful pic. Smily is do cute. :)

Beautiful words woven beautifully. :) I enjoyed reading it. :)

Chocolate Lover said...

WoOoOoOoW!! awesome di :))

Happy valentine's day ;)

ambiguous_angel said...

love it!
really nice..
especially the last line..

I guess something better would be awaiting on other side.

Creativity!! said...


nipun_garodia said...

beautiful!!! The poem is a true depiction of the current phase of my life.

Amity said...

Hi Sunakshi;

You must have read my mind... :)

Me, too, like you, is struggling who really I am while I am already in my middle life, but still have hopes that I will find my real self on the other side...:)

Very touching post dear...:)

Re: your wish that I give you some tips on writing acros, you can have lessons here: just click on the link and once you have tried your hand on it, link your acros here, too! Goodluck and hope to see you at Acrostic Only!


Big Sis Amity


Hi Sunakshi,

Despite of the sad emotions mixed in this poem still there's hope attached in each word... very well done!!!:)

Good day!!!:)



Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Beautiful lines. I sit here and read these lines with a feeling of awe. The voice within has taken a physical form in these words. Hope has been highlighted and hope is all that there is in these lines. I am touched.

Sunakshi said...

Dido-thanks :)

ayu-bingo! hmph.. thanks for stopping by :)

chandrika-nice to know that,thanks for visiting :)

Sunakshi said...

shri-aw thanks and same to you :)

angel-thanks :)

creativity-thanks for stopping by :)

nipun-you're the only one who can relate to it.hope things get fine on your way soon :)

kelvin-thanks :)

amity sis-i hope the same,thanks a lot :)

vittaldas-I guess thats what real poetry is.the one which can be felt from bottom.i am obliged to know that :)

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