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Tuesday, October 20, 2009

In the world of lies..


Hide the tangled webs within,
Because no one will ever like to listen,
Dare to live another day with smile,
If happiness doesn't stay with you even for a while.
You have learned a lot from your dumb mistakes,
Don't give  yourself a chance to repeat them again,
Even if the sorrow consumes you from inside,
Hide the pain behind the mask called life.

There is always a world beyond despair,
May be not now but someday you will be there,
Weave out the way to soothing season through the winter,
Nothing is impossible when hope doesn't surrender.
Search the sanity  lighting a candle,
Get the courage to fight for better day,
Don't drown  in ocean of instability,
Wishing each day to be the last day.
Don't let the past bother you,
If wishes were reality,
Every one would have lived happily,
No zeal remained no season faded.





 



15 comments:

Cursed♪♫ said...

Hide the pain behind the mask called life.
I love this nice. Amazingly written!

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

ahh.. painful yet beautiful :-)

Sunakshi said...

Juhi and raaji-thanks :)

DiDo said...

fantastic... as alwaysss... i'm abig fan of ur writing :)

Sunakshi said...

Dido-aw..m glad you like my work so much,i am still smiling :)thanks :)

chocolate lover said...

Hide the tangled webs within,
Because no one will ever like to listen,
Dare to live another day with smile,
If happiness doesn't stay with you even for a while

loved these lines...really it's so beautiful...and rightly said..

Ravindra Merthi said...

nicely crafted inspiring lines.
congrts for this work.

Sunakshi said...

Chocolate lover and ravindra merthi-thanks :)

yeshu said...

wow, that was a gr8 poem. . rhyming, yet thought provoking.. and philosophical, though! i liked that hiding it within bcoz nobody will listen part.. . very true!

and sunakshi, i've written the next part of the teacher story.

Varun said...

hmmm... Nice one sunakshi....


Loved this poem... awesome.

Some deep thoughts u portrayed out their. And u did that marvelously.

NIce.

Avneet Singh said...

I wish if I could reflect precisely what I desire . . .
"You have learned a lot from your dumb mistakes,
Don't give yourself a chance to repeat them again,
Even if the sorrow consumes you from inside,
Hide the pain behind the mask called life. "

I wonder if it is that easy :)

Archie

http://avneetsinghanttal.blogspot.com/2009/10/thence-no-place-finer.html

Sunakshi said...

Yeshu-nice,i was looking forward to read it,and thanks for dropping :)

Varun-thanks :)

Avneet-um agree,it isn't that easy. :)

workhard said...

There is always a world beyond despair,

May be not now but someday you will be there,

Very optimistic


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Sunakshi said...

workhard-um yeap :)

TheBluntBlogger said...

Darn life! I am all down with Jagjit singh ji's news and this poem saddened me even more :(

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