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Friday, October 23, 2009

The night tale

 
The sun sets leading the way for night,
The moon overshadows the darkness with its bright light,
The aroma of calmness brings inevitable joy,
The sound of silence makes urge to fly.
An aura of encouragement surrounds,
The pearl like stars flashes bright smiles,
Some meaningless thoughts preoccupy my mind,
I ponder over the theory behind high tide.
Someone peep from deep inside,
It whisper something i really can't decide,
I try to look for it,
But i only end up with deep sigh.
An odd vision trigger my eyes,
Its so blurr that i wonder how life changes it color,
Lost in understanding this weird game,

The moon disappears leading the way for sun to shine.









8 comments:

chocolate lover said...

sweet :) loved it..

Avneet Singh said...

too hard to resist these lines " Some meaningless thoughts preoccupy my mind " and " It whisper something i really can't decide " :)

aritra the daydreamer said...

nice...njoyed reading it....
inspired by poets like u i too am planning to try my hand at writting some poems

workhard said...

The aroma of calmness brings inevitable joy,

The sound of silence makes urge to fly.


Very intense.. lines..


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Sunakshi said...

Chocolate lover-thanks :)

Avneet singh-sorry,didn't get you.what is too hard to resist about these lines?thanks for dropping by :)

Aritra-woo cool,go ahead,i'll be reading it :)

workhard-hmph,thanks for dropping by :)

Avneet Singh said...

Um .. actually I ws tryin to get the true feel of these lines ..they are beautiful ..reading them again and again i mean .. :)

DiDo said...

The sound of silence makes urge to fly

Wow... beautiful sunakshi... again...

Ur words and ur poem preoccupy my mind :P ....too good

Sunakshi said...

Avneet-ooh thanks :)

Dido-thanks to ya again,ur comments light up my mood ;)

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