Monday, November 23, 2009

Solitary confinement

To break the silence of million years,
She need her voice her words,
A poem which was never written,
With an everlasting soothing tune!
Her eyes hold no beauty,
They are victim of cruel reality,
In the corner of her mind,
Innocent unheard thoughts reside.
 Her nights were always darker than black,
Her days were more than colorless,
Never she saw any color,
They had never been in her favor.
No where to escape,
No way to live,
Broken in ever manner,
Her life is a long solitary confinement! 
Not filling any void,
Not killing any noise,
She is breathing but can't survive,
She is living but isn't alive. 




chocolate lover said...

its really beautiful sunakshi di
great job loved it.. :))
byeeee take care..

Cursed♪♫ said...

Hi !!!
Lovely poem. The last two lines speak a lot.
Take Care!!

Ravindra Merthi said...

How sad:(
u r a visionary...brilliant

PS:why lady characters r composd as a poor one???

DiDo said...

loved the lasttt two lines.. brilliant sunkashi :)

Sunakshi said...

shri-thanks :)

cursed-thanks 4 stopping by.. :)

ravindra-thank u so much 4 da isn't always like that,that da ladies characters are always composed as poor simply depends on writers mood whom he/she choose as a character.nice to see ya back :)

dido-thank u so much :)

Tabernacle of Serenity said...

its really really really gud.. i m short of words.. keep writing :)

Sunakshi said...

Tabernacle of Serenity-thank u so much fr stopping by :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

the two lines are worth remembering..there's impact..and the irony.i really adore you and your poems..always amazing!

Sunakshi said...

ayu-thank you so much :)

Anonymous said...

very interesting, thanks

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