Thursday, November 12, 2009

Touch of coldness

She should know who she is by now she wonder,
Sometimes i think i know her,
Invisible fears embrace her frozen heart,
Early winters shivers her body in the silent night.
Through her window pane she watches the city streets,
Underneath the cold and stormy skies,
She see the clarity of her soul,
Tears falling  from her eyes messed with kohl.
Her eyes that once held life,
Now they're hard and cold as ice,
Her parted lips don't utter words,
Her sobs witness the broken dreams.
                                  I wish i could soothe her wounds,
  I wish i could ease her strain,  
But she seems to be in deep vain,
I've got nothing for her to gain.
I wish could tell this girl in the mirror,
There is nothing to fear,
Its just the matter of time,
Someday everything will surely fall in a single line.




aritra the daydreamer said...

Aha!!!nice as usual..I specially liked the ending....

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

yep that is the dream.... we are all waiting for that "some day" :-).

Very well written! :-)

Being Pramoda... said...

sure..someday every thing has to fall on line..:)

Good one sunakshi..

sulagna chatterjee said...

i agree with pramoda...someday you will see it all fall in place n den you will miss this chaos

Poornima said...

Lovely words...keep it rolling

chocolate lover said...

hi di its so nice :)
liked it :)))

chocolate lover said...

hi di you have been awarded :)

DiDo said...

Its just the matter of time,

Someday everything will surely fall in a single line.

Thats the thing that keeps everyone one of us going.. :)

Sunakshi said...

Aritra-thanks :)

raaji-thanks for stopping by :)

pramoda-yeap,it have to.thanks :)

sulagna di-hmph,looking forward for the same . :)

poornima-thanks for stopping by :)

shri-thank you so much :)

dido-yea,but there's no certainty of that day :[ thanks for stopping by :)

funkyrave said...

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Keep Blogging..
Cheerio :)

Sunakshi said...

Funkygrave-thanks :)

Ravindra Merthi said...

this is really unfortunate whatevr happnd wid her
and the beauty lies in that inspiring message givn @the end.

Sunakshi said...

Ravindra-thanks :)

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